
Pyron
Member Since February 11, 2010
Alice 3
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Hateshiganai
5476 days ago
Pyron
5476 days ago


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wtf is going on SSP? The header says this story is not even one day old, but the comments are 130 days old?
Create Your Own Fuck-venture 2: Saturday Afternoon with Violet
Loved it. Awesome how you got so many different genres into a short story, and none of it clashed.
On the spelling etc; no problems that I could see. On another note, E cup is tad unrealistic, even for those of us that like 'em big.
On the spelling etc; no problems that I could see. On another note, E cup is tad unrealistic, even for those of us that like 'em big.