PyroDust
Member Since October 19, 2009
Daddy My Shorts Are To Tight, Help me?
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LustofMandi
5071 days ago
PyroDust
5543 days ago
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Not bad at all. I'd like to see less commas and possibly a little more explanation as to who said what at times. It's a little confusing, but not too bad! ^_^