Putitinherbutt
Member Since October 19, 2009
I would not believe a dog could seduced me.
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davidj
5070 days ago
Putitinherbutt
5542 days ago
davidj
5070 days ago
Putitinherbutt
5542 days ago
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This story has potential but you need to learn how to talk. People can't understand stories like these.
A mother's tail
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Slim Summerville
Slim Summerville
Decent premise. You definitely need to speak better. Proofread and use proper English, please.
Harry Potter's Threesome
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Furby
Furby
That's my favorite spell. Aside from spelling its a decent story. I'd like to see a sequel.
Strip Poker with my Mother
by
L. Train
L. Train
Nice start. It really makes you anticipate what will happen next.
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3
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gharper
gharper
You really need to take this back to the drawing board. Check your grammar. Use spell check. Make it longer and have an actual plot. On the plus side you did use paragraphs.
New years with mom
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smallvillefan975
smallvillefan975
This ranks as one of the worst stories I have read. There is no plot, no believable writing and it is way to short. It sounds like a summary of half of the stories posted on this site.
April part 2
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styxx
styxx
It was a shame - your first story was pretty good but I could not read this one because you did not divide it into paragraphs. Please do so and repost.
Susan's Morning Fuck
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Daniel1985
Daniel1985
Very well done. Your grammar and paragraph formatting were better than many of the people that post on this site. Keep it up!
Sarah and her Brother....the story continues
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Carolina3777
Carolina3777
I like your stories very much. Keep going! Be sure to check over your grammar before you submit. Good use of paragraphs. Just be sure the series does not get to out of hand. I might stop reading when the mom starts having sex with the dog. I think you sti