Purpleladybug87
Member Since October 19, 2009
Donna's Workout
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olmike4evr
5070 days ago
Purpleladybug87
5542 days ago
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It was very good, and very long. I liked the orgies, "I can't wait unitl your next story. Maybe in the next one you should have the man confront his wife, and go from there. Overall, great job.
Jessica and Jeremy
that was okay, but it was like..., bam they had sex... the end. I think you should have slowed it down a lot more. good try though
More Kitty Tales ( and Tails)
I didn't really get it, it was too confusing. You didn't say specifically where the guy's hand was.
The Training of a Wife...part 1
Make it longer with a lot more writing! And a better story line, and use spell check.
Linda's Cherry is Popped!
what happened to John her boyfirned? because you started of talking about him and then just stopped.
A Great Vacation
it was okay you hve to slow it down more.
Winter Formal: That Night (m/m)
this is a teen story but it should be in the gay section because it has gay sex! I think you should do another part to the story with an orgy of heather, Peter, Rachel, and you. That would be really interesting.
Kidnapping Keri Part One
That was the best story I have ever ever read in my life, I was abou to have an orgasm just reading it. great job!
Traffic Jam
kinda confusing