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Girl's masturbation circle
PureMeat 4952 days ago
- 0 + Mate, this is excellent!!

I loved it!!

I really want a part two... They help each other out? Maybe in different places? at school?

They could bring toys? And maybe, eventually boys??
Justine the model student part 3
PureMeat 4972 days ago
- 0 + More More More!

Absolutely loving it!
Justine the model student part 2
PureMeat 5023 days ago
- 0 + I'm fucking loving it!! Please go on!

Love the girl on girl! Love the F/D incest and their shared dominance!

MORE MORE MORE! :D

Fuck the daughter, I don't care if she's lez. She'll like it!

Also let her fuck the mum for being such a bitch!
Justine the model student
PureMeat 5025 days ago
- 0 + Excellent story!

Can't wait for more!

Keep fucking that little whore and all her friends too! :D
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PureMeat 5030 days ago
- 0 + Fucking awesome!

MORE MORE MORE!

Also, go into more detail with the orgy... That was the most exciting part and it broke into just couple sex...

We want Group! Fuck you sister while she liks Jess!
My story... if there is interest there can be sequels and prequels, so let me know if you liked it I like feedback
PureMeat 5030 days ago
- 0 + Mate, I'm lovin' it!

Can't wait for more...

There are a few sentences that need it's grammar to be touched up on but otherwise all good...

Also, you do it quite often.. You're switching between referring to him in third person and first person.

Choose one and stick with it. ;)

Keep them Rolling! :D
Party at the bosses
PureMeat 5030 days ago
- 0 + EXCELLENT STORY!

LOVED IT!

MORE MORE MORE!!!
My Daughter's friend Natalia Part # 21
PureMeat 5288 days ago
- 0 + Hmm... I'm REALLY interested in knowing what comes next!

There's a few ways this twist could go and its killing me the wait to find out!

So pump em out buddy! You're doing a GREAT Job!

:):)
Fucking Her
PureMeat 5431 days ago
- 0 + I'm a Male and I'm turned on by you describing how you'd fuck me!

Please! Send me the illustrated version!

:):)
My Night With Jessica
PureMeat 5434 days ago
- 0 + An Excellent Story!

Just remember to keep true o the stry line...

Like in the eigth paragraph, you said he 'slipped' a condom on!

"I went back into the bedroom and got one of my condoms out of my dresser that I secretly used to keep there when my old girlfriends would come over. I slipped it onto my dick and walked back over to Jess."

But in the last paragraph, you tell that he shot his load into her...

"...as I pumped very hard one last time and my load shot into her cunt."

You don't mention a point at whichhe takes the condom off, so remeber to either mention that, or keep to the story...

Other than that!

A Great Story!

LOVED IT!
Incest Stories
PureMeat 5437 days ago
- 0 + That was Execellent!

Very Realistic and I could almost picture Every second of it!

Great Job!

Waiting for the rest to come!

:)
My Daughter's Freind Natalia Part # 16
PureMeat 5441 days ago
- 0 + Are you kiddin about noone wanting to read this?... This is by far one of the best series I've read!

Well done!

I also think the chapter is great and I liked it verymuch!

:):)
There Can Be Only One Ch 14
PureMeat 5442 days ago
- 0 + OMG!

I absolutely LOVE this Whole Story!

Can't wait for Chapter. 15!

No need for sugestions atm... Doing great on your own!