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PureEnergySex Member Since October 19, 2009
Boy's first time
PureEnergySex 5543 days ago
- 3 + Well, it sounds pretty good. But it has some errors in in. Also it helps to make paragraphs. Without paragraphs it looks like a wall of text. Whenever you have a dialouge going it also helps to paragraph there/
Freezeframe Pt2
PureEnergySex 5543 days ago
- 0 + Great story. sad ending though :(
First Encounter with young Pussy
PureEnergySex 5543 days ago
- 5 + Loved it. Cant wait for more.