Prosper2
Member Since October 19, 2009
HOME EDUCATION
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MECCY
5071 days ago
Prosper2
5543 days ago
MECCY
5071 days ago
Prosper2
5543 days ago
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Holy shit man, whats with all the fucking capitals? THIS IS NOT THE WAY TO WRITE A STORY. Not to mention it SUCKED.
Cousins at the gym
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Pennywise
Pennywise
the concept was good. but... try to build it up a little. and learn some grammar.
Loving Tiffany
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hard_hitter_harry
hard_hitter_harry
Very good story, I see potential for better stories in there, try making the sex scene last longer. keep up the good work.
Vacatition with my daughter
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rekrap
rekrap
Good story, but your spelling and grammar could use a little work.