Peter_Pan
Member Since October 19, 2009
My Georgia Peaches - Chapter 1
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BVRETR
BVRETR
completely unhinged dialog between Mandy and a 36 year old guy. Turning more into a wild sex-dream than a realtime happening.
Shaving Christy: Revised
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SilentSpirit
SilentSpirit
when you've obviously tried to fix things up but its just so babyishly written. Three sentences running beginning with "My" and "definitely" (deffinitely) spelt wrong in the opening...doesn't help your cause. You have some sexy ideas but they just come ac
Farm Yard Melody
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new_age_sandman
new_age_sandman
Don't want to add insult to all those here already but realistically it needs a heap of work. I think you should not be put off by the comments but try and improve. At least you had the guts to publish something......bet 90% of the crap reviewers never h
Compulsion
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
What I SUBMITTED was the next Harper Valley episode that SSP claim now to have "lost"...as well as two OTHER stories! So your guess would be as good as mine!
Who's To Say?
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
I am utterly confuzzled! I can only suppose you have totally misconstrued and obviously misunderstod my motives for writing this! What in God's name leads you to believe I was encouraging people to wank off over Callie's appalling death? You really irri
Who's To Say?
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
It is a great story and I completely understand why you wrote it. That it is sad beyond all things os without question but for me...Callie really lives.
Camping with the boys; a big sister's point of view.
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Venus2on1
Venus2on1
Hysterical dialog like that just makes the reader fall about laughing. What girl says "spray your hot young cum into my cunt?" If I heard any girl do that I'd be dialling 911
Making Christina
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AcousticDavid
AcousticDavid
SSP trying to fob everyone off that they're posting heapz of new stories? This site is totally fucked!
Easy Pickings
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babymaker
babymaker
This story is a carbon copy...almost down to the dialog, of a story which i just can't recall the title of on SSP earlier this year. That one wasn't much good either!
"F" Is For Female
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
Apologies for this pathetic mess. Having withdrawn this submission and fully re-edited it to remove the formatting disasters, SSP has re-published it in a worse condition than previously. Draw your own conclusions!
Fucking the dream teacher Pt. 3....finaly
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saberturbo
saberturbo
Giving you a "nine" just to keep you honest heheh, But really, I want to leave room for you to get even better! To compare it with most other submissions though - it's worth a "12" Well done, and I know you spent a lot of time on this one. It really pai
sleep over
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watchout
watchout
By far the worst, shortest and most illiterate piece of garbage ever passed by SSP editors!
Naughty next door - 4
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steve6060
steve6060
sheer poetry.....rather like "I kissed her listening ears" or "I caressed her well-fitting wig,' Either way - magic!
My sweet little Tanya
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daggdon0
daggdon0
if only I could dream up such eloquent prose. Truly deserving of the highest literary merit....makes me shiver!
Harper Valley Family Crisis
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
Due to site maintenance at Lulu this weekend, "The Complete Harper Valley" will show as "unavailable" until Monday (28th) when the book will again be listed for purchase.
I/They regret any inconvenience caused
I/They regret any inconvenience caused
Maria's Cumming Out II
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
Completely unrealistic and reading like a sad old man's wet dream! You obviously have no respect for a woman whatsoever! Yukky!
Maria's Cumming Out II
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
My apologies Dustin! Ben is absolutely right - I had no right to slate your work simply on account of the fact I took exception to the main character's treatment of the young girl and the entire concept of her being abused rather than "loved." Many migh
A Fuck Long awaited
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Darkbrokenlove
Darkbrokenlove
Or maybe a 'long-awaited fuck'....either way, its more a case of a long-awaited paragraph! Another unassailable gem from the vaults of SSP!
New Cyber Buddy
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SeductiveVampyrXXX
SeductiveVampyrXXX
What IS this? a submission? or next year's April Fools Day come early? Why, I ask, would anyone, the undead or otherwise, wish to advertise the fact they left school in Fourth Grade?
Doesn't say a whole lot for the level of editorial control here eithe
Doesn't say a whole lot for the level of editorial control here eithe
Lindas story (FORCED SEX)
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Jolly1
Jolly1
Even assuming this happened - and with the dialog sounding like a Z-grade porn movie (O Fuck-Ya!") I rather doubts it, besides, how much sympathy can you expect under the circumstances?
The idea of a middle-aged woman getting raped by a bunch of dirtba
The idea of a middle-aged woman getting raped by a bunch of dirtba
Dog's Bitch in Heat Part III
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Rodger-the-Dodger
Rodger-the-Dodger
All three parts together don't even make up one decent story.
True, it is better than so many others here but the typos are a major distraction as well. But NOT without promise ...give ya that!