Pejiak
Member Since October 19, 2009
Massage from sis!
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Vaughan
5071 days ago
Pejiak
5543 days ago
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It was a nice concept, but you should really work on spelling words out. Also, a story is always nice if it's somewhat long and has good descriptions of the characters and such.
Sweet as candy
It could have been much longer. The details just weren't there.
Kris and I
This story got me into making an account. You must make a part 2. Very well written.
Blind Love
I think you did very well. It's a whole new thing, with the blind woman. But you pulled it off, and I'm looking forward to your next piece of work, aslong as a part 2, if you would.
A week at Aunt Molly's - Part 1
Great storyline, good start. Lets see some more like a part 2, 3, and 4!
Naughty next door - A teacher gets taught
Fantastic story! As Tara last said in the story, "I'd be disappointed if this was a one time thing."
And I believe I would be disappointing if there isn't a part 2.
And I believe I would be disappointing if there isn't a part 2.
My New Ability
At first, I figured this would be your tipical super natural power story, that'd be pretty lame. This could be the greatest story I've read yet. Congradulations. Now don't leave with just one story, send more please. :)
Sister and Niece
I see you will probably only make a part 2, if someone responds and wants a part 2. I would like to be the first to ask, please give me a part 2. I'd love to see a threesome within this family.
The Dirtier, The Better
I only really comment on the ones I really like. And I must say, this story is put together so well. I'd like to know, when is part 2 coming? Maybe add in the teacher to the mix, or just make a new adventure for the original two. Great Story!
Hidden Cove - Part 6
Wow is all I have to say. I loved the entire story, all 6 parts. I'm only hoping you can throw down some more awesome stories.