MistressOfSin
Member Since October 19, 2009
Strange questions
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Devilstale
5071 days ago
MistressOfSin
5542 days ago
Devilstale
5071 days ago
MistressOfSin
5542 days ago
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Ur writin' has a good startin' point but there is a need to break it down to simple sentence structures...and also if U could use spell check n-stead of havin' the readers tryin' to figure out what U are tryin' to say would also B greatly appreciated amon
DOING THE DOBERMANS
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TINY WALDO
TINY WALDO
OMG!!!!!!.....U have got to be kiddin' puttin' such horror on here...first of all U need to sentence structure ur words...its all a bunch of garbage that U have put on here for someone to read...please re-do this monster of none sense...it dont even make
Was it love or just sex?
by
MissSerious
MissSerious
Vanetra...this is a start...but just as a suggestion...please consider to proof-read your stories before postin' them also use another colour other than green as that colour plays hard on ones eyes...I n fact liked the ideal of your story just keep it up
School dayz
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daprimeobjective
daprimeobjective
That was a suicidal attempt..please no more none sense...and the sentence structure was just a horror of words put together to create absolutely nothing...
My Beautiful Niece
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tocs8188
tocs8188
If in fact that U r referring to ur Uncle his daughter dont U think would in fact B ur cousin...come on now if U really must write...clearly write something that is readable and imaginable...this story was in my opinion the far worst story that I have eve