LuckyCharm
Member Since January 31, 2011
The New Guest Pt 3: Home-Cumming
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LuckyCharm
4593 days ago
LuckyCharm
4590 days ago
LuckyCharm
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4590 days ago
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My Very First Cool Sword!!!! Thank you for the kind gestures, I am honored good sir. I already have the baseline for the next chapter in focus, so hopefully won't take as long as it has in the past to get it written up and posted.
The Tropical Island
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sexyboy22
sexyboy22
Awesome story, had me hard and intrigued simultaneously. Keep the story going, please. I can't wait to find out more about the island and what happened to dad and the pilot. Too much left to quit :)
moms pussy.
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sglide99
sglide99
I agree with Minion, great concept that was just realized too quickly. I would have loved to see more details. Going at mom, going at friend, dad going at boy, boy sharing mom, lotsa of storylines in there. Expand on each one individually and you may have a little series on your hands.
Family of Sex
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sexyboy22
sexyboy22
This story has my FULL attention. There are soooo many sexual possibilities with this group. I too like ellie and her dog, I hope there will be more of those two in future chapters. I do think the aspect I enjoy most about this story is the social acceptance of human sexuality (amongst the family at least). I love it! Please, please write more!
The New Guest Pt. 2: Initiated
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LuckyCharm
LuckyCharm
This chapter was as much, if not more, fun to write than the first. I'm always looking for feedback. Comments, opinions, and/or ideas are all welcomed, Thank you guys so much for reading. Take care and hope your day is a moist one.
The New Guest Pt 1: Confronted
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LuckyCharm
LuckyCharm
I had alot of fun writing this. Please let me know what you think.
The New Guest Pt 1: Confronted
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LuckyCharm
LuckyCharm
I apologize to all of you for the delay, but I assure you that part 2 is under way and should be posted soon.
The New Guest Pt 1: Confronted
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LuckyCharm
LuckyCharm
Pt2 is now under upcoming stories...comments and opinions are appreciated...thanks to everyone and I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Father Williams
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sonofasubmariner
sonofasubmariner
Its nice to see a priest being manipulated and molested by an alter boy for a change. Way to strike back for the little guys; make jesus sexy again! Work on your spelling and grammer. Develop your characters a bit more.
Mom get force entry
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Slim Summerville
Slim Summerville
I agree with popfoul's observations, but there is one thing I find humerous about the criticizing of the literary work at hand. Punctuation, grammer, and spelling errors are all present in the critical statement itself. I'm just saying. I say it wasn't quite as bad as popfoul would have believed, but I do think you need to work at the craft more. I liked the story, but I definitely wanted more from it than what I received. It threatened to be a good read, keep at it and you'll get there.
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wanda02
wanda02
I'm letting go of the caps, the wall, and the exclamation points; still don't like it. Just not a fan of the story, even if I didn't mind trudging through the other stuff. If its fantasy, yikes! And if that were a true story, I'd have kept that crap to myself. Or at least juiced it up some.
Ass Play
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Fyre
Fyre
This was an awesome story, got my cock so hard and my ass wet. The descriptions of the cleaning were great. I am very much into anal play and do not like the mess that can happen. I have devised through my own trial and error, just about the same cleansing routine. The main difference being that I let gravity push the water inside me instead of squeezing the enema bag. Just so accurate, though. Even down to the twitch in my legs after a deep fuck. Love it. Hope to read more