
LongDuckDong
Member Since October 19, 2009
Me and My Mom Part II
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Amethyst9
5134 days ago
LongDuckDong
5606 days ago


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Not only is this fucking terrible, it should be removed because of the 1 year olds. The story is horribly written as well. BAD BAD BAD!
I was bored
Bad. Horrible spelling, hard to follow. Fragmented.
Educating Laura Pt 1
But I thought that a 15 year old girl would not be so naive. The story would flow better if she was say 13 or so.