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Llhorn15 Member Since October 19, 2009

lil boy fun by

smilesnd 5070 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 2 + You write like a hillbilly talks.

Touch me, Mommy by

MzDeviancy 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 10 + great

Touch me, Mommy by

MzDeviancy 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 10 + great

Me and little sis. part1 by

micky999 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 4 + Why are you writing in ghetto talk?

Deer Hunters get there Doe. by

freeassplay 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 4 + Spelling,spelling. Use the spell check.

Night in by

jrdownie 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 1 + One big paragraph sucks

My Sis Obsession by

liam1090 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 1 + * is as low as I can go. A -***would be better

Go back to school and learn how to spell and write

2 Weeks with my cum luving sister by

XAshleyX 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 6 + Is it Ashley or Jessica

Alone for the weekend by

naughty_girl2 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 4 + One big paragraph.

Learn how to write before you submit any more stories.

Perverted Neighbour by

Journalist 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 6 + Not bad, but proof reading spell checking wouldn't hurt.

Dad and his frinds raped me by

Sun Chips 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 0 + What language is this written in?

Get someone who is intelligent to read your stories before you post them.

The spelling is terrible.

A nice collage story by

Stinz12 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 1 + Use dictonary.

A collage is a group photos in a frame.

How did your story ever get posted as a sex story?

Me and my best friend by

dudewhere 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 0 + Some punctuation would help along with some paragraphs.

5 1/2 inches around. Give me a break.

playing with patti part 2 (training the tramp) by

playfulgirl2001 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 10 + Great. keep it up.

Night in with anna by

jrdownie 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 1 + One big paragraph sucks

slave_ofthe_jackal by

Hannah 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 3 + poor spelling. go back to school.

Kelly's sexy schoolgirl panties - chapter 1 by

emily 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 4 + Try using a writing tool called a paragraph before you write any more.

I stopped reading after the first few lines because it rambled on and on.

Kelly's sexy schoolgirl panties - chapter 1 by

emily 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 10 + you still haven't learned how to write.

Me and my Hot Neighbor by

gabholz 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 2 + Far fetched

The Wedding Night I Won't Ever Forget by

BONDAGE 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 0 + What school did you go to?

What language is it written in

Passed Out Drunk by

CalicoJack 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 6 + Make up your mind. On one line you say she doesn't have tits and then you say he's cupping her tits.

The Sins of St. Sebastiens - Chapter 3 by

Tom Slick 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 10 + I can't wait for more chapters

fucked at night by

watchout 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 1 + Terrible

My big Brother Jack . by

sweetongue 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 4 + Go back to Grammer school and learn how to spell and write.

My redheaded neighbor by

thechaseter 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 3 + Pretty good but needs better spelling an grammer

my girlfreind and her freind by

zeroboy11 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 2 + spell check

Life by

ramirez 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 2 + use spell check

My little sis(part one) by

lovenator.kevin 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 2 + don't bother writing any more until you take some writing,grammer,and spelling lessons

Teacher teach so meany things! by

hott_surfer109 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 8 + Gimme a break. 8 inches around. That's as big as a soup can. Even John Holmes wasn't that big.

2 Girls from school and her dad? by

sugarhighwoo 5071 days ago

Llhorn15 5542 days ago

- 3 + try using periods so everything doesn't run together