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Lady_Courtesan83 Member Since October 19, 2009
The Robsons Chapter 2
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 8 + I loved this one too and I can't wait for Chapter Three! As they're on a farm do you think you might let horses enter the story somewhere? I'd love to hear about Lisa in the dog kennels too. :)
If you go down to the woods today, beware of a big surprise...
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 8 + I think that Sarah would have been a lot more scared at first, maybe even blaming her parents for making her walk the dog and after the rape wondering what would be next but scared and slightly excited (the latter secretly of course). Other than that lit
Mary's Bad Day
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 5 + The story was very good and very sexy but very unrealistic when it came to the man and woman's dick sizes...not that they couldn't be that long or that thick I suppose but because they probably would have killed Mary in reality had they not used varying s
The Taking
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 10 + I loved this story! Are you going to write a second part at all?
Charlenes Destiny
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 3 + A good storyline but the telling of it was rather muddled. You desperately need to spell check and separate your paragraphs as it's incredibly hard to read in it's current format. You also need to go a bit more into what Charlene is feeling (ie: her fea
The Robsons Chapter 1
Lady_Courtesan83 5542 days ago
- 8 + I really really liked it...I would love to read another chapter...and more...of this story!