L6
Member Since October 19, 2009
Slut Training I
Retract the claws badlybent. George Bush be damned because this is still America where one is entitled to ones opinion. There are basics involved in any story such as providing a way for the reader to form an attachment with the character or leading into
The young and the beautiful
Decent Build Up, but no background on male.
Passed Out Drunk
Story theme was good but flow was sporadic and was not consistent.
My Wife Barb 5
More episodes.
My Wife Barb 5
Really hope that you add to this series soon. Been checking back for awhile now don't keep us in suspense!
The story lacks the thrill of the hunt. Just wam bam thank you slut.
It reads more like an act of humiliation by a sadist than eroticism. Hard to believe that anyone could marry somebody and treat them so poorly.