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L6 Member Since October 19, 2009
Slut Training I
L6 5542 days ago
- 6 + Wow story reads like you hate women!

The story lacks the thrill of the hunt. Just wam bam thank you slut.

It reads more like an act of humiliation by a sadist than eroticism. Hard to believe that anyone could marry somebody and treat them so poorly.
Slut Training I
L6 5542 days ago
- 4 + Retract the claws badlybent. George Bush be damned because this is still America where one is entitled to ones opinion. There are basics involved in any story such as providing a way for the reader to form an attachment with the character or leading into
The young and the beautiful
L6 5542 days ago
- 3 + Decent Build Up, but no background on male.
Passed Out Drunk
L6 5542 days ago
- 6 + Story theme was good but flow was sporadic and was not consistent.
My Wife Barb 5
L6 5542 days ago
- 10 + More episodes.
My Wife Barb 5
L6 5542 days ago
- 10 + Really hope that you add to this series soon. Been checking back for awhile now don't keep us in suspense!