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Krysta Member Since October 19, 2009
Charlotte at School
Krysta 5543 days ago
- 8 + A few typos but well written, the no paragraphs coud be worked onit hurt my eyes to follow endless text.

Very hot excellent senario. Good Job
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Krysta 5543 days ago
- 10 + I only hated one thing about it... The ending.

More specifically, that it ended at all. :( It takes longer than that to satisfy myself, write a longer story next!