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JelloBibBoy Member Since October 19, 2009
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JelloBibBoy 5543 days ago
- 5 + It was a good story overall but really cliche. Also, you should learn how to spell or do spell check or something because at parts it is hard to figure out the words.
only love.... lifetime lust
JelloBibBoy 5543 days ago
- 8 + the details were good but learn how to spell properly and not this ghetto spelling