JackntheBox
Member Since October 19, 2009
Senior Year
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JackntheBox
5070 days ago
JackntheBox
5542 days ago
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Wowza. Not bad at all.
I've Been Watching You
I liked! Tres bien!
The Broker
Snazzy. Nice writing - kept me interested. Well formatted, easy to read. Punctuation, too! As for the story, short but sweet. I'm all for setting the moral compass as low as it'll go. I'd like to see more...
Monstrous Sexy
Meat balloons? Chesticles? Skee-skee-skee'd? Ha!
Closed on Sunday
Liked the plot - a lot - but seriously work on organizing the paragraphs and spellchecking. A little more work to make it easier to read, and you've got a hot fuck story.
The Trouble With Alana
Nice! Let's see the next story...