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JackntheBox Member Since October 19, 2009
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JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 10 + Wowza. Not bad at all.
I've Been Watching You
JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 6 + I liked! Tres bien!
The Broker
JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 6 + Snazzy. Nice writing - kept me interested. Well formatted, easy to read. Punctuation, too! As for the story, short but sweet. I'm all for setting the moral compass as low as it'll go. I'd like to see more...
Monstrous Sexy
JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 4 + Meat balloons? Chesticles? Skee-skee-skee'd? Ha!
Closed on Sunday
JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 2 + Liked the plot - a lot - but seriously work on organizing the paragraphs and spellchecking. A little more work to make it easier to read, and you've got a hot fuck story.
The Trouble With Alana
JackntheBox 5542 days ago
- 8 + Nice! Let's see the next story...