JackBNimble
Member Since October 19, 2009
Bloody Mary
by
Parsons
5070 days ago
JackBNimble
5542 days ago
Parsons
5070 days ago
JackBNimble
5542 days ago
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8
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Maybe I'm the odd ball, but I thought the story was above average. Also, I've had sex with a woman while she was on her period many times and enjoyed it so I give it a "thumbs up".
Getting caught with your pants down, the family pet and answering to mum
by
freewayoflove
freewayoflove
Formatting is off, which makes it hard to read and writing in the first person is difficult to do well. Also, it seemed very rushed, like you were trying to put to much into one story.
Behind the closed doors - 1
by
butli
butli
First off...on the measurements...you realize that you made her breasts a (very small) 28 inch frame size, but her waist 34? Basically she's fat and small breasted the way this was written...just thought I'd see if that's what you were going for?
Beyo
Beyo
Leslie My Daughter
by
Opiated_Mass
Opiated_Mass
I agree with CB...you started off with a great premise that could easily spin into a whole, wonderful series of stories...you could have built the characters and really explored both of their new-found sexualities... but then you just cut to the quick org
My affections for daughter Karla, and her love for Daddy!
by
unclejoe8008
unclejoe8008
Could have been better. It reads like a porno movie, not like anything close to real incest.