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Ic4ss Member Since October 19, 2009
Wizards of waverly place by kev5655 5465 days ago
Ic4ss 5543 days ago
- -1 + Sentances are too choppy, spelling is sometimes off, grammar is way off, and sometimes things are repeated.

It seems someone who was eleven wrote this.

Your sentances have absolutely no flow, they're just one after the other. There is no description