HardcoreGamer
Member Since October 19, 2009
My First Sexual Encounter with a Woman
by
L1sa1974
L1sa1974
Grammar and Spelling aside, this was a good story, well set up, and not too rushed. However, might I suggest you write your stories in Microsoft Word, or a similar word processor, with a spellchecker, and then copy/paste into your browser, rather than wr
Angel part two
by
eggycheese
eggycheese
a good story, well started, but i felt this second installment could have been a bit longer, it seemed somehow rushed. however, a new author, you're doing great. your spelling and grammar seem to be top as well, just a little more descriptivness and len
Camping with the slutty scout part 2
by
dobber01
dobber01
like Chris says, maybe a bit longer, also, if you want to put in every section, perhaops change this one slightly so it isn't her sister, put into the Lesbian section, and then have a bro/sis or something similar for the incest section. just my twopenn'o
The twins
by
etothec
etothec
a good premise, 2 young girls, alone in the house, etc. etc. unfortunately, your story was far too rushed, eric. very little dialogue, the only description i caught was "large b cup breasts and shaved tight pink pussys". how tall are they, what build, ar
Me and Mah Sisters
by
icekold666
icekold666
well, that sucked. but i say this in a constructive way, you understand.
love the storyline, and he descriptiveness was really good. i could almost imagine being in the fitting room with them, or watching the hunky pool guy...
soooo, is Joey going to go to St. Petersburg next?