
Hacker001
Member Since October 19, 2009
I was supposed to be baby sitting
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davidj
5134 days ago
Hacker001
5606 days ago


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It was'nt good, but it was'nt bad. You realy need to work on your writing skills, it seemed as thoguh you were in the 5th grade with all those typo's. Setting was ok along with the story, you need a bit more of an imagination, I meen who here was that wel