Giggityguy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Jordan's First
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Sardonicus
5176 days ago
Giggityguy
5648 days ago
Sardonicus
5176 days ago
Giggityguy
5648 days ago
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nice set up and sex scene, but the transition was shaky. good overall.
My Sister and Me
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Giggityguy
Giggityguy
thanks for the feedback guys. i havent had much time to work on the sequel till lately, but its almost finished. i'll post it soon, and maybe another sequel after that 1. sorry it took me so long.
Aubrey and Kristen
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Potatoguy123
Potatoguy123
I appreciate good writing, but most people who read things on this website are more interested in the sex. I think that your writing is incredible, but most people will want you to include the actual sex. Try to balance that with your current style. Ex
Brother and two sisters have fun
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GiveGiveGive
GiveGiveGive
This story makes very little sense, does not hold together well, and is actually very short despite what you said. Keep working on your writing
How I lost My Virginity, and Gained my confidence.
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Dylan_Darfunkel
Dylan_Darfunkel
the sex scene was a bit rushed, and going from "waiting for the special girl" to fucking your teacher makes no sense. Otherwise, good job.
The Emily Prequel: Early Years Of Lust
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Neurotica
Neurotica
Dude you have an awesome premise here and you can take it and run with it; expand.
Freezeframe Pt2
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Marti
Marti
Extremely well written. I also like the ending; the way it wasnt necessary for the sex aspect but still made it a better story. I respect you as a writer of both sexy stories and of simply good stories
TRUE STORY: “AT 13, MY DOG TOOK MY VIRGINITYâ€Â
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BuccaBabe@Yahoo.com
BuccaBabe@Yahoo.com
well written but needs an ending