Gendo
Member Since October 19, 2009
Britney and the Beast
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sexkitty
5070 days ago
Gendo
5542 days ago
sexkitty
5070 days ago
Gendo
5542 days ago
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10
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GREAT STORY! Very well written, thought out, I enjoyed a lot of it, and I hope to see more installments of this story later on! Hope the next is just as good, or even better than this!
I would not believe a dog could seduced me.
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davidj
davidj
It was a good story, but you've got to work on details, sentence structure, grammar, and fixing up minor spelling errors. You also must remember that when a person talks, you have to "", and when another person starts to talk you have to start another pa
I was supposed to be baby sitting
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davidj
davidj
It was a good story, but you need to qoute it and start new sentences when people talk, it was pretty hard to read and understand some points. So I can only give ya a 3 stars, if you want, you should revise the story and re-submit it with some of things
The Making of a Big Tittied Cumslut
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GullyGus
GullyGus
Well, the story was good, but your writing skills are horrible! When you say a person's name over and over, it's really bad, you should use "He" or "She". For instance, "Three days after Sandy had watched the moving van pull away it was back. Sandy want
Mommy, Sonny And a Voyeur V-2
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Gora
Gora
I waited so long to see this happen! It was fantastic! I dunno if you plan on makeing another story or two, but I'd love to hear the aftermath of what happened that night;) Would love to see how slutty Meg has become, and how Justin turns out!
All I wanted to do was fuck the shit out of her...
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storieteller
storieteller
Right, how cruel men can be, lets not also forget that a woman can be just as a cruel as a man. This story is shit, and it's obvious you dislike man. Your reason, I couldn't care, but this story was pretty bad story wise and has many grammer errors. If
Sisterly love
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roger28752000
roger28752000
Ok, do you not read at all? I mean come on, a good story is not freakin one paragraph. It was a good plot set and all, but what we need is DETAILS! We need to know the whole story! We need to know names, and everything.
Fun with my Teacher
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ian578
ian578
Might be a true story, but this is writen so horribly, it just sounds fake! Seriously, learn to write! My opinion, Read some stories, set up the structure better, put more detail into it, use proper grammer, punctuation, and just make it so that it look
riding shotgun (revised)
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brtrick
brtrick
I liked it! Well, to say, I really loved it! The story that is, I do hope that this isn't true. But anyways, if you have my opinion, he's drunk, just come up from behind with a suitcase or somethin, and knock him out, than take your wife back home and
My mother's body...
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Unknown123
Unknown123
This is a pretty good story, although the sex scene felt a bit rushed. Remember, there's no limit on how big the story can go, so write it out fully next time you make a story, people love details.
Hope you'll write out another chapter for this.
Hope you'll write out another chapter for this.
Sex Therapy
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funnyab
funnyab
It's a good story, but you know, the grammer, sentence structer, and grammer is all horrible! It ruined the story line, and I couldn't even read half of it! I will say, the story line is good, but you'll have to rewrite this story and submit it after yo
ME&MY AUNT
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langger_08
langger_08
NOt even worth reading, it's too short, not a lot of details, no real story, nothing to make anyone want to read it, or your work again. SOme advice, read some stories on here, that got high rating, and than write again. Otherwise, don't bother to submi
My Son the Doctor
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EMERSON
EMERSON
This was such a great story! I just love how the mother can't stop it, and I can't wait till the next installment. I'm guessin it'll be about how Linda treats her:D
Please Mom
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Bdawg304
Bdawg304
It was good, nice sentence structure and the plot was, from what i've read at least, a bit original. The only things I had problems were the occassional mispelled word, incorrect use of punctuation, and the fact that it doesn't sound real for a kid that
A friends daughter: true story, incest young female/ older femele & male
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shutterbug51
shutterbug51
Ok, way to short, no description, some minor grammer and spelling errors. It's a good plot, but you have to STRETCH this out. I mean, read some of the other stories, and You'll see that all the great stories ARE LONGER THAN ONE PARAGRAPH!
Dog Rape
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redymix
redymix
For the love of God, LEARN TO WRITE! Seriously, this is a peice of crap! No grammer, no punctuation, no spelling(There is such a thing as spell check you know!), and it's pretty hard to read. I will say, it was a decent story, better than most, and a b
My sexy mom part two
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rekrap
rekrap
Learning to write first? YOu didn't qoute anything said, you didn't write in paragraphs, almost 2/3'rds of everything is misspelled or incorrect grammer. Seriously, before you even submit part 2, resubmit part 1 corrected and readable... Other wise, it