
Gemini9
Member Since October 19, 2009
Raven's tale
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Pharoah
5134 days ago
Gemini9
5606 days ago


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So far it is a good start, but you need to go much farther with your story. It is not more than an introduction just yet, and you really should run spell-check and look into your grammer. Also you need more detail; get into what your characters are thinki
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I think that is giving this sad excuse for a story far too much credit.