FyoraSilverwolf
Member Since October 19, 2009
Lupus Dark Day
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Tsuldav
Tsuldav
Congratulations for writing the only story I've ever liked that the woman was dominant in. I'm looking forward to a sequel, especially if he gets his revenge. That was a GREAT story.
The Adult Bookstore
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storydude
storydude
I liked it a lot, but it had a sad ending...Write more, but please, for my sake, make them happy endings...or at least very cum-filled ones?
A power co. employee finds another fool woman.
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vlad
vlad
I loved the beginning...but I feel it needs a bit more detail as to the actual act. I know you've got it. ;)
Twisted Teen Tales 01
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jethro jodhpur
jethro jodhpur
I liked the idea of it, but something just seemed to be missing. Perhaps add some specific dialogue for your next stories?
Slave Holiday with Master.
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Miss C
Miss C
I usually don't like stories from the sub's perspective, but I LOVED this one. More, please!!
Jento The Soldier, Part II, The Major's Wife
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dick inkum
dick inkum
That was pretty good. But I liked your first one better. Perhaps you could really go into detail more? That just seemed like a simple play-by-play account, no feeling there.
Also, what's with the question marks?
Very good though, in my humble opinion.
Also, what's with the question marks?
Very good though, in my humble opinion.
Drummer Boy
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gokothegiant
gokothegiant
It's not really bizarre, but I'm glad it was here, or I never would've found it, and I really really would've been missing out. Write a second part, please!
My Wife Barb 5
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mkmike
mkmike
I want more!! Keep writing! (but work on dividing it kind of into short sections, I keep losing what line I'm on)
Old Man's Lust For 14 Year Old Pussy
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jrenfroe
jrenfroe
Your story was awesome. It reminds me of my master, I can't wait for part 2!!
Though I would very much like it if you would write a longer one next time, that one just barel