
FreakieJeni
Member Since October 19, 2009
One Mans Last Gambit: Eve Frosted on Christmas Eve (Chapter One)
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Solomon
5179 days ago
FreakieJeni
5651 days ago


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I loved it. It was well written, and that's not seen much. My only complaint is that you work so hard to build it up only to come to a quick conclusion. You shouldn't have ended it so quickly, but I look forward to chapter two.