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Fly4aWhiteGuy Member Since October 19, 2009
Lilith
Fly4aWhiteGuy 5543 days ago
- 1 + holy hell, paragraphs are your friend.
Icy Hot Part 2
Fly4aWhiteGuy 5543 days ago
- 10 + I'm sorry. But I did NOT submit the story like that. They screwed up something and made it into one huge paragraph.
Icy Hot
Fly4aWhiteGuy 5543 days ago
- 10 + this is the author to clear up a few things.

1. The Power was not out. The AC unit broke. Which means it did not work(heat or cold). It was winter time so the cold outside made it cold inside as well.

2. part 2 is comin soon. They take awhile to up