FeatherLord
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Right as a Husband
by
Arcen Tarimas
5196 days ago
FeatherLord
5668 days ago
Arcen Tarimas
5196 days ago
FeatherLord
5668 days ago
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10
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i give it a five to bring the net rating up a bit. it's quite beautifully written (although a bit too flowery), and it has abnormal dialogues for casual conversation. it sounds a bit rushed, and as the second review stated, it needs some more developing p
Back to School
by
Jolly1
Jolly1
a believable plot, very well done. the major thing you need to look out for are spelling errors. :o