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Eversteron99 Member Since October 19, 2009
The Silken Family Trap Part IV
Eversteron99 5542 days ago
- 7 + The sex scenes were well drawn out yet the use of the word sheer was way too frequent.
While Mommy's Sleeping
Eversteron99 5542 days ago
- 5 + That was way too unrealistic-some sort of a fantasy land where every in skinny/muscular, the guys have huge cocks and the girls are horny as hell. It really kills the story which is potentially good but needs work. Don't stop writing