Etolie
Member Since October 19, 2009
TABOO
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ashish
5071 days ago
Etolie
5543 days ago
ashish
5071 days ago
Etolie
5543 days ago
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decent, turned off the by the semi wall of words. I loved the fact it was very conversational though. keep it up
Shayla
by
Babewatcher
Babewatcher
Exelent, good set up, Great ending, imo ending a story is the hardest part and so often done incorectly. Keep up the good work