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El_Perro_Gordo Member Since October 19, 2009
The first indication by billy1809 5102 days ago
El_Perro_Gordo 5573 days ago
- 4 + Your story was very well written having good punctuation and grammer. I really enjoyed it as it was neither childish or vulgar, but rather innocent and sweet - as though it were a natural experience.

I would have given you a 5-Star rating, but it was a