DrewDP1331
Member Since October 19, 2009
Touch me, Mommy
by
MzDeviancy
MzDeviancy
I love the story line, and its well written. I'm looking forward for an update
a day i'll never forget(true story)
by
gman995
gman995
well everyone said basicly everything you need.. so.. i agree with them..
Mom took my cherry
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tecate1215
tecate1215
its a great story, exept i rly dont think u know what a cherry is... so u might wnat to find out, and fix that..
my best friends sister
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pussy2k6
pussy2k6
i normaly dont review, but i just want this rating to go down to prevent other people from reading this and becomeing stupider...
Babysittin turn to sex time
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aceofspades
aceofspades
ive seen alot of these paragraph storys that completly suck.. do ppl make these to piss ppl off or somthing.. anyway... just dont write.. you suck.. try writing full words, useing punctuation, detail, story lines, more than a paragraph, and about 50 other
Brother & Sister: Part 2
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world_refugee
world_refugee
this is still a great story, and 1 of my favorite storys on this site.. 5 stars only because thats the max.. maybe ill review it again because it so good..
Brother & Sister: Part 2
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world_refugee
world_refugee
its that good.. now plz try get 3 out faster than 2.. but rly do whatever it takes to get another story this good..
My Turn (Pt. 1)
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storieteller
storieteller
there was 1 or 2 errors that i saw.. the instead of they.. little stuff.. but might want to re-read that anyway.. and to enjoy ur own story.
also, the sex at the end, the main part of the story.. was a little short.. i think you should have gave a little
also, the sex at the end, the main part of the story.. was a little short.. i think you should have gave a little
My Beautiful Niece
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tocs8188
tocs8188
first, it would be a cousin story, second it was way to short, no detail whatsoever and no story, plz dont write another storry until you have read some and know what a story is actualy like!
me n my cousin
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jayfrommbro
jayfrommbro
that REALLY SUCKED! a paragraph, thats basicly 1 long sentance with periods thrown in.. couldnt read it.. no story line.. the list goes on.. so rly dude dont write till you at least pass 1st grade english
Dads away mom and i play
by
mangoman
mangoman
4, but 5 for ppl that dont know shit...
it was a good story, but could have been better.
first, explain.. that u live on a farm or somthing.. when i first heard trailer i was thinking trailer park.. then a barn at the end... 2nd use quotes, and more umm
it was a good story, but could have been better.
first, explain.. that u live on a farm or somthing.. when i first heard trailer i was thinking trailer park.. then a barn at the end... 2nd use quotes, and more umm
Mitchs Adventures in Incest (LONG!)
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wickedtea
wickedtea
I rated 4 only because of grammer/spelling errors, and it was more group/taboo based then incest.. but its still a great story.. keep it up!
Sister and Niece, Part II
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Great8
Great8
I think this story needs one more (for this session atleast) This is deffinatly not 'over the top'
One more chapter should be it for this session, where we get some cock-pussy action. And then if you want you can do more at another time, or stop it. but
One more chapter should be it for this session, where we get some cock-pussy action. And then if you want you can do more at another time, or stop it. but
Clair Is Forced To Help Dad Out Of Debt.
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bigboydaddy
bigboydaddy
I gave you 4.. there where too many spelling and punctuation errors. Usually i dont mind, and it looked like you wernt american, but i stoped reading when i couldnt tell who was talking.. and thats pretty bad.. so 4 cuz its a good story.. but your really
my mom and the babysitter
by
cam2090
cam2090
wow... leave it to a crappy writer to screw up the best scenerios... could have been great.. if you had made it more than a long drawn out sentance..
My Girls Chapter 15
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unknown1000u2
unknown1000u2
5 stars. There’s so many chapters, I forget to rate.. But yea.. It’s still great; even if you don’t get feedback, don’t stop writing. In fact, write faster! That was a long break.. And then 2 chapters.. Cant u at least release chapters as there do
keep writeing!!!