Defabio
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Conference Room
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r2wicket
5134 days ago
Defabio
5606 days ago
r2wicket
5134 days ago
Defabio
5606 days ago
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Break this mass of words into paragraphs. Paragraphs, when properly used are for your benefit: they allow you to more precisely convey your ideas, and allow your readers to understand what you are conveying. This hurts my eyes.
Amateur Glamour Model
by
Jolly1
Jolly1
When I see massive words like this story, I don't even begin to read it. It's impopssible. Magpie, you need to edit this mass of letters!! Edit!Edit! Edit! Each new speaker should have a separate paragraph. Each paragraph should have a separate idea.