Dbzsix
Member Since October 19, 2009
Casey and Danni
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femme220
5070 days ago
Dbzsix
5542 days ago
femme220
5070 days ago
Dbzsix
5542 days ago
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I hope there is a sequal to this, it was a very well-written story.
Amys Ranger
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KittenzK
KittenzK
I agree with the guest. This was just a horrible story. Bring it back to the drawing board, give us the story that the beginning promised, please.
Christmas Carolers
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AkonMyrkez
AkonMyrkez
Jesus christ man, paragraphs. I don't care if this is your first story or not, it was hardly worth reading.
Throwaway Child: A Love Story
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hillarysmuff
hillarysmuff
That was a very great story. Please do write a second.
My best friend Amy pt.2
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brentoes
brentoes
Maybe add a little bit of conversation with "" quotation marks, but other than that it really is good. Please write a third.
I found a daughter I never knew I had.
by
davidj
davidj
Finally, a good story on SSP. There aren't many nowadays.
Playing House with my Cousin
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FilthyDirtyOne
FilthyDirtyOne
I do agree with consistency, however some people start out a story one way, find it too hard/hectic to continue, and finish it another way. For instance, first person is extremely hard for me to do. The change didn't entirely destroy the story, it was a g
My Girls Chapter 8
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unknown1000u2
unknown1000u2
I really hope that you continue with this series. It's probably the best, nae it is the best, series I've ever read on this site. Only one other story ties with this series, and it doesn't count as it wasn't a series to begin with, only a one shot story.