Daddyz_Gurl
Member Since October 19, 2009
At long last
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shareme
5100 days ago
Daddyz_Gurl
5572 days ago
shareme
5100 days ago
Daddyz_Gurl
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This has to be a joke right?
One Mans Last Gambit: Eve Frosted on Christmas Eve (Chapter One)
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Solomon
Solomon
Totally wrecked when you said you "slipped in further and came to a barrier." Sorry to disappoint you, but a girl's hymen is OUTSIDE the vagina (Just hang-on while I check that!)....yep, I'm right, you couldn't "slip in" anywhere!
Second half didn't q
Second half didn't q
Intemperate Acquaintances: A Halloween Tale
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
I would never have expected to see something this well written on a site like this. Are you a professional writer?
Bruno and I get Mom
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sugaray
sugaray
It shows how juvenile you are in the first line....watching cartoons at 15? Sorry, but this is absolute garbage! Try posting THIS at Literotica and see how far you get!
The wrong place at the wrong time
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davidj
davidj
If this is the intellectual profile of a typical SSP reader, things are bad. Complete drivel!
MY SECRETARY VEENA
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ashish
ashish
Minus 6 points for the pic and a further three for the "wall of words." The only person could possibly have voted this a "ten" is you!
My Sis Obsession
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liam1090
liam1090
Frightening that this person can one day biologocally be a father. There is no excuse for CRAP like this from anyone above 6 and even less excuse from SSP that they pass this for publishing. Why would the owners/administrators of this site want to make T
SWEET SWEETY
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noori03
noori03
About as sexy as someone snoring! Shows the difference between the average brain-dead maleand someone with a little respect for a woman.
Voices
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
God knows what those last two dumber than dumb reviewers were reading....couldn't have been this! Beautifully written, it was both hot and interesting! Obviously many other people think the same thing!
The Party!
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mea1on1
mea1on1
You sound like someone so wussy you would pour ketchup over ur dick if someone suggested it!
Camping with the slutty scout part 2
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dobber01
dobber01
This is soo short you couldn't call it much more than a postcard. How long did you spend on this - 15 minutes?
A decent "story" should be about 10-12 pages...around 4-6000 words!
A decent "story" should be about 10-12 pages...around 4-6000 words!
Kidnapped
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pooftis
pooftis
Why anyone would write juvenile, cruel and pointless trash like this amazes me. If this is what turns you on, whatever sex you are..you're not all there!
Maria's Cumming Out
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
Better than many but let down by poor grammar and laughable dialog.."Yes, Yup I do!" As for the "hairless spilt" that finished it for me.
It Begins
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Raybear
Raybear
Braindead and childish from the opening - I'm assuming you ARE twelve years old! A story needs to be interesting..have some sort of decent intro, use intelligent words and definitely be something a tad longer. This was a postcard!
Having said that tho
Having said that tho
Teacher teach so meany things!
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hott_surfer109
hott_surfer109
Did you ever GO to school? I have never seen such illiterate rubbish. It doesn't even make sense in places - obviously English is not your first language. Spelling is incredibly bad and the tenses all messed up. Your teacher is female then male a few wor
Tangled
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ironsnurse
ironsnurse
Something with purpose! Achieves more in just a few lines than most of the last fifty story submissions...make that the last 500!
Some thought went into it!
Some thought went into it!
Lady In The House - Part VIII
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PantyhosePrincess
PantyhosePrincess
Reviewing and rating your OWN stories.....I note you reviewed an earlier episode of yours as being "fantastic" Talk about being a "legend in your own mind"
New years with mom
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smallvillefan975
smallvillefan975
You think HALF a page...not even that...rates as a "story?" This is b...shit! Why even bother?
My Beautiful Niece
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tocs8188
tocs8188
Overly short, illiterate, moronic, pointless, downmarket and just plain a waste of everyone's time. Sleazy and low-rent junk
Our Endless Hunger
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Mickey Pig Knuckles
Mickey Pig Knuckles
"Great Poets reflect emotion"....you have a fair way to go I'd say to make that grade.
Me and My sista
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johnathon
johnathon
I think this is the most illiterate, juvenile, unreadable trash anyone ever wrote. Kids in 4th grade should be able to express themselves better. If this represents your standard of education and intelligence....its pretty damn sad....whatever your age -
Cleaning the Stallion Pt1
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trace69
trace69
Are you kidding? How long did this take....12 minutes? A "decent" story should be 10-12 pages!
First time anal with Leanne
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mrwrong
mrwrong
You think just one paragraph of 29 lines makes a "story?" That's not even half a page! Suggest you look at some other submissions (The Other Room 6, Gift From the Gods series. Harper Valley series.....THESE are stories. get real!
Dad Wants Daughter. Whether she likes it or not!
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KandehX
KandehX
Kompleet unejukated trash. Another top-rating peece of junk from SSP
Joy, Sonya and Maverick
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leglvr44
leglvr44
Ever heard of tenses? Lines like "My wife loved to ride" suggests she's probably dead or at least, crippled! There is no excuse for illiterate work like this - at ANY age!
Teaching Tahlia
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Poppasan
Poppasan
"I have been trying to bring up a good idea to get to fuck the guts out of her"..........Do you imagine lines like that are sexy? arousing? intelligent? Besides being illiterate they give a clear indication of the grotty upbringing of the author. Grade
2 Times a Night
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iws82
iws82
As Michael says below...."Why would you even bother to submit such embarrassingly written material? Just makes you look pathetic!