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ChrisW Member Since October 19, 2009
My mother, my lover by Figment 5070 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 1 + Its called spell check! Look into it. You started out okay then the story flopped, like a dead fish on hot concrete.

It smells like it too...
Simon's Seduction by shotgun227 5070 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 10 + Very Hot, can't wait for part 2
Blame It On The Heatwave by introibo 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 3 + Way to many typos. This makes the story hard to read.
He treated her like she didn't exist! Now she was free! by shelbygt1967 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 0 + Looser is spelt Loser look it up online!
My Dads Girlfriend and Me by chapelle3 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 10 + I hope ther is a part 2 coming up
Taste of the british by Luckey7indy 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 8 + I liked it. Though it was a, "little short." So far its a good story now you need to flesh it out some more.
My Mother( MY $100 WHORE) PT. 3 by gharper 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 5 + What a bunch of morons. I liked the story typo's and all.

I'm hopping to read the rest soon!

And you moron the plot is "INCEST" or "KEEP IT IN THE FAMILY."
Chicken Chicken by peregrinne 5071 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 5 + This is one hell of a good start! Can't wait for more!

I hope you'll post this over in FictionMania http://www.fictionmania.com/enter.html />
Thank you!
Accident at the Movies by lau 5261 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 0 + this story just wasn't there!

you waisted our time with it.
No Other Choice Pt 3 by SteffanyHurst 5424 days ago
ChrisW 5542 days ago
- 0 + The story plot is ok but your delivery sucks. You need to learn how to use punctuation's. And your sentence structure is terrible. pleas rewrite it is so distracting that I can not read the complete story, I get a headache trying to do so.