
CarolinaDevil
Member Since October 19, 2009
My Daughter and ME
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necodemas
5425 days ago
CarolinaDevil
5690 days ago


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There were a lot of problems with this. switching from past-tense to present-tense then back again, spelling, the constant focus on impregnating her - though a very hot thought, not quite useful if you keep using it. Sorry if this was a bit brutal... th