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Bronze189 Member Since October 19, 2009
Brown's shoe store I
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + Without a doubt, the MOST in-depth, passionate, and well-written story I've ever seen on this site, or (pretty much) any other. You have a gift man. Only problem is that you didn't give very good body descriptions. I'm sure that with your talent, you c
Chuck and Tracy's friends Part 2
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 5 + The content was good, but it was FAR too jumbled. Try and insert paragraph breaks to help with that.
After School
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + Very well written, but we didn't get too much background. A prequel might be in order, but a sequel would be appreciated too :-D
The Twins
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + One of the best stories I've read here, with a good mix of sex and plotline, though I'm sure you'll get a few complaints about how few sex scenes or the length... well don't listen to them! I'd love to see more from you of this quality!
The school slut and the Shy boy
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + WOW! Very well-written, emotional, and romantic comic. The only thing that could have used a bit of touching up was the physical descriptions of the characters. However, since one of the nice things with stuff like this is being able to put yourself in
Halloween Sex
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + Very good job on this. Well done setup, descriptions of the characters and the like, but the actual sex scenes were just a tad rushed after he went down on her. Just make sure to keep a good level of description, mood, etc. in the next installment, and
My First Orgasm
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 10 + As I said, this was VERY well done. One of the best stories I've read on this site thus far, except for being a tad short. I hope to continue seeing more of your stories, as well as continual improvement. :-)
The Dirtier, The Better
Bronze189 5542 days ago
- 1 + Hands down the most descriptive story on here... except for outlining the characters, but that was all right by me. Keep up the good work!