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BluryNightmares Member Since October 19, 2009
COURSE OF TREATMENT
BluryNightmares 5543 days ago
- 10 + Positively brilliant.
And there is one less virgin
BluryNightmares 5543 days ago
- 1 + Trying sticking to either first person or third person, you switched it up in between.

This story just needs work in general though.