BluryNightmares
Member Since October 19, 2009
COURSE OF TREATMENT
by
Defabio
5071 days ago
BluryNightmares
5543 days ago
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10
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Positively brilliant.
And there is one less virgin
Trying sticking to either first person or third person, you switched it up in between.
This story just needs work in general though.
This story just needs work in general though.