
BlackSun
Member Since October 19, 2009
Crossing The Line To The Promised Land
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cleanshaven
5134 days ago
BlackSun
5606 days ago


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Very very good. There aren't many people who can build up suspense easily in an erotic story but you did it. I look forward to more quality writing from you soon.
Crossing The Line To The Promised Land
perfect 5 by the way
The babysitter and my mother
Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. This has become my favorite series so far.
Emily II: An Incestuous Commitment
although shorter than the first, it was still worth the read! Can't wait to see what happens on the wedding night ;)
A secret revealed
for new paragragh
i think
i think
Mitchs Adventures in Incest (LONG!)
other than grammar/spelling and mislabeling, it was awesome. keep up the good writing.
Wake Up, Daddy! Chapter 7
Very good. Love the series so far. Can't wait till the next chapter!
My sister like to dress sexy
spell check, paragraphs, and a little revision.