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Brotherly, Sisterly Love by g_goyal2000 5517 days ago
Barrak 5517 days ago
- 0 + Nice story, you certainly have a gift for writing. However, in future please try to tone down the verbiage. You have an almost poetic way of writing which gave your story good flow & made for a great read. But you tended to get a bit wordy sometimes. Try to work on that. Good job. Keep them coming.