Aydrian
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Unexpected Fuck For The Cutest Little Duff!
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fuCkuRselF
5175 days ago
Aydrian
5647 days ago
fuCkuRselF
5175 days ago
Aydrian
5647 days ago
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I gave it a one because you put little effort into it. COMPLETELY rewrite this story, every sentence, every word, every letter. I also wrote a story about Hilary Duff called The Sexy Hillary Duff....this was just bad. Sorry man I do not mean to flame but
Matt & Lizzie Move In
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hillarysmuff
hillarysmuff
Hello, I'll give you a constructive review, seeing as I think I might be the only one, a lot of people can be rather rude on this website.
First of all, the biggest mistake of the story was you went way too fast with it. Keep the reader in suspense for
First of all, the biggest mistake of the story was you went way too fast with it. Keep the reader in suspense for
Dizzy Mrs Lizzie
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bakerman
bakerman
OK, there was a couple things I liked and didn't like about this story. First of all this needs to be made WAY more believable. Especially at the end where Hilary walks in, it is kind of like you took the easy way out at the ending. Also this story almost
Angelina's Secret Hideout
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jessy19
jessy19
I didn't even begin to read this. You did the infamous wall of words. Start putting them into paragraphs and I'll read it. Later.