AtlantisX
Member Since October 19, 2009
Sarah 4
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JMartone
5071 days ago
AtlantisX
5543 days ago
JMartone
5071 days ago
AtlantisX
5543 days ago
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Have you ever HAD sex before? The one tip in writing is to write about what you know, and this doesn't seem like you really know sex at all. Whether this is fiction or not, seriously man, sex doesn't work the way you describe it here. It had potential at
Broken but Whole
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TruthTeller
TruthTeller
Hey, great story! A little editing could be done, a little extension of description, but overall, I give it the high rating. It's not too often you find sex stories with love in them, and you've pulled it off! Five stars!