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chained rose
12-26-2006, 05:23 PM
Know this

what i feel for You is
different
from anything that anyone else has ever felt for you --

not better,
not worse,
just different.

it flows from that
part of me
that no one has ever touched before:

that core deep within me that
i had always thought
was
unreachable.

that piece of myself
i kept behind a wall i thought
was unbreakable.

the wall,
that had withstood
so much,
evaporated
at a word
from You.

vanished in the soft caress
of Your voice --

as if it had
never existed
at
all

leaving me exposed,
trembling,
and afraid

i liked my wall--
it kept me safe.

i was secure behind it,
with only the hurts
of the past
and no threat of ones in the future.

i look around me
in awe
at the scattered remnants of that wall.

unsure --
unknowing --
with nowhere to hide
no shelter to seek --
except
in your embrace,
in your eyes.

Tigrok
12-26-2006, 08:15 PM
Very powerful Poem rose.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
I really enjoyed reading it.

davesmistress
12-26-2006, 08:29 PM
Thanks Rose....Very touching indeed....I enjoyed it.....Thanks for sharing it

chained rose
12-27-2006, 10:22 AM
thanks both of you, glad you liked it

Scorpio8
12-28-2006, 10:02 AM
I see these words and know the feeling behind them.

It's all just part of who you are inside Rose.

Well done and wonderfully spoken lady!!!

Aloha Jack
12-28-2006, 09:50 PM
Rose,
In feeling,
Reaching,
Myself, touched.
It deeply felt!