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chained rose
11-06-2006, 08:26 AM
Dragon Song
(serial haiku -- May 12, 2006)


dance for a Dragon
lure the heat from his eyes, with
soft and pliant limbs

gaze on the Dragon
raw need plain in my eyes,
feeding flames of lust

drawn by Dragon fire,
craving to be consumed
in His inferno

touching the Dragon,
adoring with soft fingers
as i learn his skin

serving the Dragon,
soothing his furrowed brow,
kneading his shoulders

tasting the Dragon,
lips moving, brushing his flesh,
drinking His essence

seized by Dragon,
grasped firm in his power,
lost in his embrace

marked by Dragon,
flesh ripped and blood spilled,
my cries ecstatic

taken by Dragon,
his pleasure ripped from me--
a willing victim

cede to the Dragon,
sweet surrender in my eyes,
not victim, but gift

held by my Dragon,
his gaze caressing my soul,
drowning in his eyes

drifting with Dragon,
into sleep, our souls touching,
meeting in our dreams

Scorpio8
11-06-2006, 09:17 AM
I could easily see why this could quickly become addictive!!!

This is a lovely way to show love, honor and devotion to your
Master.

Exceptional work, Rose.

Leigh
11-06-2006, 09:27 AM
Very Nice Rose.....you certainly have a way with words

chained rose
11-06-2006, 09:40 AM
Thank you both. Most of my poetry is of the free verse variety, but occasionally like to shoulder the discipline of meter.

fsugirl10
11-06-2006, 03:49 PM
once again rose strikes with a nice piece of work ^^

Semigloss
11-06-2006, 07:19 PM
A truly amazing and beautiful poem. It is very memorable and makes me wish that I was not so useless at poetry.

But of course, whenever I have something to say, I realize that I can say it a hundred times faster in prose, so I can never bring myself to bother with poetry. Still, this poem makes me ponder what could be if I were to put in the effort.

ElizaDoolittle
11-06-2006, 08:01 PM
i LOVE haiku.. what an awesome piece rose..

chained rose
11-06-2006, 08:34 PM
i cannot thank all of you enough. Master liked when i gave it to Him, but he might just be a bit prejudiced.
rose

Tigrok
11-08-2006, 07:23 PM
Very Nice Poem Chained Rose thank you for sharing!

Aloha Jack
12-28-2006, 11:51 PM
Meter is but one
Element of the style
Meditational