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MYDaddysBox
09-23-2006, 10:09 AM
:icon139: "GONE"
MYDaddysBox


Gone with the wind
any emotions tied to
love.

Gone any feelings
that might have come
from above.

Gone, something so dear
and once thought, to be so near.

Gone is the feelings, we
once shared.. Gone,
the thought, that you
once cared..

Gone is where i'am,
hidden inside myself
is where i hide. The
one place i may find some
pride, and peace of mind.

Gone where the
heart is, to search
for me, maybe through
this will come the end if thee
the one who was once thought,
to be me..


Gone and all alone
is how he may feel, i do
not wish for him to see,
the me, like this.

lost and filled with emptiness.
so for a while i'll lose my smile,
but just for a time i am gone.

Scorpio8
09-23-2006, 02:19 PM
Well worded and nice flow with this poem.

Excellent work on this one!!!

freedom37803
09-23-2006, 02:23 PM
Wonderful poem...you have a talent...thanks for sharing it!

Tigrok
11-08-2006, 07:30 PM
Thank you for Sharing this poem has reminded me of a young lady who pulls into herself on occation. Well Written and Portrays A feeling of hurt.

Thank you again for Sharing My Daddys Box!!