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freedom37803
07-03-2006, 06:43 PM
Wrapped in silence,
We sleep in a loving embrace.
In the darkness your hands creep,
Over my body.

I can feel the hunger in your hands.
Gripping my breast through my shirt.
A moan escapes my lips,
Surprise awakening me.

My body moves in response,
As your hands find their way,
Under my shirt,
Fondling my hard nipples.

I begin to writh,
As you awake my passions.
My moans grow,
Feeling you hands move lower.

Your hand brushes my thigh,
My heart jumps with excitement.
I feel you moveing slowly,
Yet with confidence.

You know what you want.
I let out a cry of pleasure,
As your fingers,
Slid into my dripping pussy.

Moving with purpose,
Causeing my body to writh,
Loud moans as you move,
Deep inside of me.

As I moan,
You seem to work harder,
Then I feel it,
As it nears.

You move your hand faster,
Bringing me to climax.
My back arches as I release.
Breathing ragged.

You wrap your arms around me,
Replacing the passion,
With a deep sweet kiss.
Holding me close.

Letting the night,
Surround us in silence once again.
Broken only by sighs of contentment,
As dreams sweep us away once again.

davesmistress
07-03-2006, 06:48 PM
Wow Fabulous Freedom...Very sexy and Erotic...Thanks for sharing it.

freedom37803
07-03-2006, 06:56 PM
You know I LOVE poetry...these threads maybe my home away from home now...lol

davesmistress
07-03-2006, 07:07 PM
Hahhhaa well that is great...we havent had any In quite awhile...

Scorpio8
07-03-2006, 07:18 PM
This is a big step in another direction from your other
work but I like the course it's taken.

Making the turn to more erotic images is not always
easy to do transition wise but you captured it
so well here. ;peek;

I think you can spin tales and create poetery pretty
much anyway that feels right to you at the moment
and that's a sign of a real artist who uses words
to paint on the canvas of the mind.

Cheers to you lady Freedom!!! :clap