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Ev0xis
01-01-2020, 05:35 AM
We were all sitting around the fire, having a good time laughing with each other. Robert (15) had volunteered to the store to get another bag of marshmallows as we had ran out before the sun had fully set. Sarah (14) had decided to join him on his trip, Sarah wouldn't admit it but she was in love with Robert. She didn't know it but Robert loved her too but neither of them could muster the courage to tell each other. They quickly made their way to the truck and drove off, leaving just Juilianna (14) and I (15) by the fire.

Juilianna had turned to me, her face illuminated by the dim fire, and her hair reflecting the moonlight. She called my name, "David" as I looked at her, I couldn't help but be captured by her beauty. I can only describe it as being in shock. I could hear her say something but I couldn't understand her. Noticing this, she repeated herself "David, I'm getting cold". Hearing this, I woke from the trance I had been cast into. I removed the red and black flannel she had given me for my birthday so that I may give it to her. She held her hand out as if to say no, she stood up, taking a half step so that she may sit on my lap, laying her legs across the arm rest of my chair. Taking my flannel and using it like a blanket and wrapping her arms around my neck. "I think I'll be warm enough soon, ya know, you can be so dense sometimes". I wrapped my left arm around her, placing my hand on her belly, turning my head so that I may gaze at her charming beauty once more, "what has gotten into you tonight, You never like this?" I said softly. She looked up at me, gazing into my eyes. She spoke softly like an angel "I guess it's just because we're alone, next to a hot fire, it just made me get a hot feeling, I just wanted to be closer to you". "And here I thought you said you were cold?"I replied, going in for a quick kiss. It was our first kiss, not just with each other but neither of us had kissed anyone. I had intended for it to be just a quick kiss. When I tried to pull away, she pushed her face closer, putting her hand on the back of my head pulling it closer. What had been intended to be an innocent kiss evolved, she pushed her tongue into my mouth, pulling mine into hers. Our lips and tongues were entwined. I couldn't pull away even if I wanted to. She let my lips free so she could speak "your getting excited aren't you?" She glanced down away from my face down to my lap, were she is sitting. She was right, I was getting excited, and it was obvious.

I asked her if she was sure that she wanted to do this. She looked at me and nodded, she said that she had been wanting to for a month but didn't know how to bring it up. She took my hand and stood up, jerking me to my feet. I was surprised, I didn't know that she could do that, I mean, she is only 4'11" and I'm 5'10". She noticed I was surprised but didn't care, she dragged me inside and threw me on my bed, I asked her if she was on the pill, she chuckled and said "we're not even out of highschool, what do you think?" I told her I would get a condom but it would take a minute to get it, as I made my way to my bathroom to find the box of condoms I had hidden, I told Juilianna to to get undressed. I grabbed a condom and made my way to my room, getting undressed on my way leaving only my pants when u got to the foot of my bed. Once again, I found myself in shock when I saw Juilianna, lying on my bed in just her red bra and panties, looking even more beautiful than before. I was Fumbling with my belt when she stood up, putting her hands on my shoulders, spinning me around, and throwing my on my bed and unzipping my pants, pulling them off violently.

She climbed on top of me, moving her panties out of the way. I tried to give her the condom because she wouldn't let me do I myself, she grabbed it, and threw it across the room saying that she wanted nothing between us. I Should have stopped her, but I agreed with her. I wanted nothing to be between us in any way. She gently grabbed my dick and and slowly lowered herself only it, letting out a soft and quiet moan. First our first kiss, now losing our virginity to each other. After she lowered herself as much as she could, she leaned down and put her hands besides my head and said "give me a second, I didn't know that just putting it in would make me need a second" I put my arms around her and in clamped her bra, tossing it aside. "Don't worry, I'll I take the lead" I told her in a whisper. I wrapped arms around her and rolled over, putting myself on top. I started humping slowly at first, enjoying every moment. She let out a gentle but loud moan, I couldn't help but let out a moan myself. I started going faster, being gentle as to not risk hurting her. Her arms tightened around me, she swung her legs around my waist. She was pulling me closer and tighter than before, I could her breast were tight against my chest, her how breath, and of course, the tight squeezing of her pussy.

Being unable to gently thrust I had to get a bit rough, slowly getting rougher and rougher until It was borderline kinky. She moaned loudly and screamed my name, at first I thought I hurt her until then I saw the look on her face, pure pleasure. She dug her nails into my back, at first it hurt, but then it turned to pleasure, the feeling of her nails in my back digging deeper and deeper only served to fuel my lust, I thrusted faster and faster being as rough as I could until I couldn't go any more. She yelled that she was Cuming. I was slowing down because I was getting close. Until finally I came. Unleashing my load inside her hot pussy, I couldn't help but yell "FUCK, JUILIANNA YOU'RE AMAZING!" she came right after I did, letting out a loud moan, "fuck, I don't want it to stop. If feels so good" she cried. I climbed off of her and lied down next to her. I was about to say something when I heard Robert pull into the driveway. Juilianna and I scrambled to get dressed and back out to our chairs by the fire, behind the house. We got out there just in time as we saw Robert and Sarah making their way to the fire. I noticed that Sarah's hair was a mess, and neither of them were carrying a bag of marshmallows. I looked to Robert and cracked a smile, apparently he noticed Juilianna's hair was a mess too, so he cracked a smile back


This is the first piece I have ever written with any effort. I'm afraid I may delete it if I read it over too closely because I'm super critical of my work. I ask that you give any input you have, even if it's harsh.

groomleader
01-01-2020, 06:25 AM
It's a really good story. Write some more!

actionmaster6
01-02-2020, 07:39 PM
Keep on writing! Really good first attempt. Would be interested in reading more of your writing.

comsmith22
06-10-2020, 07:15 PM
Hot Little Story … It could Lead into a Hot wet Series Or More Hot Chapters... Thanks For The Share...