ladies of fate

[kaidman]

time
time enough at last
time for everything
time to become
time for renewed hope
time for a begining
time for a end
just time
past present future
skuuld uurd verdandy
my three favorite ladies
the ladies of fate

[jessy19]

time
time enough at last
time for everything
time to become
time for renewed hope
time for a begining
time for a end
just time
past present future
skuuld uurd verdandy
my three favorite ladies
the ladies of fate

Very interesting care to elaborate more on this poem?

[kaidman]

I was bored and wrote it about the njord sisters the three who govern fate in norse myth

[Brigit Astar]

I like this poem because it made me think. That may sound funny, but I think a good successful poem is one that makes the reader stop and think.

[kaidman]

I like this poem because it made me think. That may sound funny, but I think a good successful poem is one that makes the reader stop and think.


coming from you that means the world I wrote it while waiting for jessy on the chat box

[TelltaleInsanty]

Very nice. I really like it.

[kmere44549]

makes you think about the past the present and what the future might be

as always good stuff from kaidman

[Marlene38EE]

time
time enough at last
time for everything
time to become
time for renewed hope
time for a begining
time for a end
just time
past present future
skuuld uurd verdandy
my three favorite ladies
the ladies of fate

Sometime, hundreds of years from now, someone's going to read that--hopefully from a real page and not a comp. file--and will be as impressed by it's truth and elegance-in-simplicity as we are right now.
It is VERY good!!. :icon095:

[kaidman]

Sometime, hundreds of years from now, someone's going to read that--hopefully from a real page and not a comp. file--and will be as impressed by it's truth and elegance-in-simplicity as we are right now.
It is VERY good!!. :icon095:

thanks I was bored on chat box and waiting for jessy and I wrote it there then transfered it to poems section